Attempted Kidnapping
I was too confused to think. What did the creepy guy want with me? He was staring at me through disturbed eyes. His gang was there too and they looked angry. They were pointing to me and everyone was staring at me. I didn't know what to do. Some big, brave looking guy who was watching the movie, stood up and asked what the gang members were doing in the theater. The leader, the man who came and cursed at me earlier, shoved the large man and he fell, without grace, to the red theater seats. Then, faster than you can say "Run!", a huge fist fight went out. All the men in the theater could see that the gang member wanted to do something nasty and illegal to me, so they all went to stand up for me. The first punch was thrown by one of the gang members. Not the leader or man that got shoved. It was bad. I looked around and people were lying, injured and beaten, across the theater. This was all happening when someone was getting murdered in the movie. I was scared. I looked around again, and all my friends were going out the emergency exit. Kyle was still next to me. He was shaking furiously. He seemed like he was in shock. "Kyle?" He didn't answer. Instead he pushed me away, but gently. He charged to the gang. "KYLE NO!" The next thing I know... I hear a gunshot. Blood covers the floor. And then... everything goes black.
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I wake up and I'm staring at a ceiling. My head is hurting unbearably. I gently lift my body up to look around. I get shoved back roughly. I'm in a bed. It's pretty comfortable actually. I see a black man with tattoo's. He backs away so I can see Stephan moaning on the ground with blood coming out of his leg.
2 comments:
haha that was so funny. I loved the description at the beginning like when you said "if looks could kill, I would be dead now." I really liked that.
Ok so you said you needed an idea, right? I have got an idea. Maybe you can have a little twist in the story. You can have the guy with the tatoo shift side and introduce another character. Another villan you would be the guy with the tatoo's boss. The villan wouldn't know that the guy with the tatoo has shifted side so he will tell him all of his plans and then kyle can use that plan to free vanessa. At the end the villan would be caught. If you don't like it, maybe you can make some adjustions.
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